Write an email that your supervisor will read and reply
Supervisors are very busy people. You might think that they have only a few hours class a week, but they are also doing hundred other things like research, grant writing, workshops, book publishing etc. On top of that, they also get hundred other emails daily from students who wants them to be their supervisor. So how do you stand out from the crowd?
Write the best email subject ever : “Prospective Phd Student”
Start with the keyword – “Prospective Phd Student” and add in your year. It guarantees that your supervisor will open your email at least. Why? Because part of their jobscope is to train more PhDs. Besides that, as an academician they love getting smart students. So if you put your subject saying you are a prospective Phd Student, your supervisor will most probably open the email.
So the key to get that email opened is subject line “Prospective Phd Student 2012/2013″ . Until I started with that I had about 5% reply rate. After I put that subject line in email, the reply rate went to 80% and above.
First paragraph : Your Name, what you do and how you found him / her
Your first paragraph should be your name and what you do. Example
Dear Professor ABC_full name,
I am Avijit Paul and I work as a tutor in Faculty of Creative Multimedia at Multimedia University, Malaysia. I read at <website name, journal name> about your various projects involving emerging technologies, big data analysis and natural disaster.
What this tells your potential supervisor that you have an idea what he or she is doing while informing where you are from and how your work may be related to his. Please try not to write more than 3 lines. And before I forget, first email it is best to write his or her full name.
Second paragraph: Brief summary of your RELATED experience
Immediately after that you should tell him or her what have you done so far that makes you qualified to work under his or her supervision and how you may potentially contribute. Example:
So far I have worked mostly on small scale mobile applications and virtual reality projects and for last one year I had been working on iPhone, android and nokia apps, Augmented Reality and games using various middleware programs such as Unity3d, Appcelerator etc. Besides that, I have created various websites over last 8 years.
Third paragraph: Action line – what you expect him or her to do
So you have informed who you are, what you do and how you got to know him. You have also informed how you have done related work. Now is call for action. Tell him that you want to work with him or her. Example:
After reading your profile and your list of projects at the website I am very eager to know about research opportunities to work with you.
That’s it: And Keep it to 10 line
Basically once you write that, you are done. Before you send the email, please double check, tripple check your spelling. If you have wrong spelling, you are just reducing your chance of getting the reply!! So make sure the spelling is correct. End with:
With regards
Your name
Contact details
And it is really important to keep the email short because if the professor is interested, he or she will ask more. If not, they will ignore or sometimes suggest who you can potentially contact.
So if you have done what I suggested, you will surely increase your chance of getting your email read and hopefully you wil get some positive reply.
Oh ya, Use a non funky email address please
This is a post from Assistant Professor Dr. Chris Blattman of Yale that I stumbled upon. It tells you some very importnat stuff that I missed such as having a non-funky email address.
Kick the email address from high school. It’s time for “hot_muffin92@hotmail.com” and “mikey_g@gmail.com” to rest in peace.
So if you are Mikey Walsh, you should have a mikey.walsh at gmail rather that having the “cool” nickenames.
Go ahead and read the 12 points – they are definitely worth your time: http://chrisblattman.com/2010/11/08/students-how-to-email-to-your-professor-employer-and-professional-peers/
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About Avijit Paul
I am a PhD student at Queensland University of Technology, Australia. My primary field of work is in analyzing and making sense of ‘big data’ generated from Social Networks during crisis events. As my work involves design and programming, I constantly switch between these two areas. On top of that I am also interested in business and founded couple of startups. Please visit about me page from the top menu to learn more about me.




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When writing to the supervisor (for the first time), is it necessary to attach a proposal?
What worked for me is, keep the proposal ready but do not send in the first email. This is because many university email program is designed to catch any attachment from first time email address. So if the supervisor replies, I sent the proposal immediately.
Thanks, that’s helpful.
Glad to hear that
Is it advisable to write to more than 1 supervisor at the same time? I mean from the same University. Or should I wait till one replies to approach the other?
Can help me with a sample Phd Research Proposal? I m completely lost as in how to start writing the proposal as in where to search for appropriate literature. I have got few uni’s interested in accepting my Phd and ask me to send proposal which is where I m stuck. Appreciate your help, thanks!
Please have a look at http://avi.my/2012/01/how-to-find-what-you-want-to-research/ to get an idea how you can start with your idea. Then you can use Google Scholar or webofknowledge to start finding literature review.
I am afraid I can’t help further as I have my own phd to do.
many thanks Avi, this is indeed very helpful…appreciate it very much and wish you goodluck in your Phd completion…
Thanks a lot Avijit Paul for your great writing. It seems very helpful for the prospective research student. I have further one question regarding this. Do I need to attach research proposal and bio-sketch/CV with first email?
Appreciate your help, thanks.
Raiyan
Send normal email first and then attach bio when they reply. High chance the email filter will take your email as spam if you attach multiple files first time.
Thanks for your tactful writing and useful data for PhD application. Do you think that it is not necessary to mention master and bachelor GPAs in the email? also, no need to attach even the CV to the first email??
I do not put all the information except just a few lines such as what is my interest and what I read about the Professor because long emails wont get read – professors get hundred email a day! Any attachment has a high chance to go to junk mail.
Is it advisable to write to more than 1 supervisor at the same time? I mean from the same University or different university. Or should I wait till one replies to approach the other?
Tricky, I did that and sometimes it is embarrassing but sometimes worth the try.